Nine Tail Fox
I walk among the caves in my village searching for a bug. In the corner of my eye I suddenly see two red lights shining from a cave. I wonder what it is, as I enter, I start to shiver. A piercing feeling made me shiver, I was suddenly frightened, and I could feel a murderous intent. I see the red lights staring into my eyes. I walk towards the light and I come to the entrance of a giant cage. I hear something; “Come closer” says the voice. I touch the bars of the cage and suddenly realized there was a gigantic red fox in the cage. It had red fur; each red tail has spikes on the end. Suddenly I get knocked unconscious.
When I woke, I was sleeping in my cosy bed, feeling pain in my right arm. I reach for the glass of water with my right hand I knocked the water over and my arm was wet. I felt so much pain, and I could see that blood was coming out. The glass broke and my mum rushed in, she sees my arm and tells me to stay still. She brings a towel, wipes my arm and unwraps the bandage. The injury isn’t really deep, as I look at the blood, I can’t stand looking at my blood. My mum comes back and brings some more bandages and wraps my arm. I remember seeing the fox and wonder if I really saw one, or was it a dream.
In the afternoon, I wanted to confirm if the fox was real or not. So I went to the caves again, searching in every cave for any lights, fox, or cage. There was no trace of any big footprints or pieces of a cage anywhere, so I assumed there wasn’t any fox. So I went home and had a good nights sleep.
July 24th, 2007 at 7:50 pm
Hiya Clement,
Nice post, it is really interesting.
I like the way you described the environment around you.
I think you should add a picture.
Here are some questions for you:
Why is the fox in a cage?
Where is your story set?
Is the character’s right arm still sore?
Please answer!
Naomi
July 25th, 2007 at 9:31 am
Hi Naomi,
I will add a picture , well the fox is in a cage is because it is a dangerous and unique specie .
My story is set near the caves, in the village.
Yes,the character’s arm is still sore.
August 1st, 2007 at 9:47 am
Hi Clement! Great blog! Who put the fox in the cage?
August 1st, 2007 at 9:58 am
Hi Sarah,
Thanks for the comment, the part where the fox is put in, is not in the story. So I don’t know.
August 5th, 2007 at 9:07 am
Hi Clement, Great blog!! Where did you get the idea for a Nine Tailed Fox???
August 5th, 2007 at 12:21 pm
Hi Emily,
Thanks for the comment, I got the idea from Naruto.
August 8th, 2007 at 10:40 am
Hi Clement, cool blog! How did you get a pain in your arm and why?
August 8th, 2007 at 10:49 am
How did you feel when you saw the fox? I would’ve been scared for sure!
Ramiz
August 8th, 2007 at 10:58 am
Hi Timothy,
Thanks for the comment. When I got knocked unconscious, I got hurt.
October 12th, 2007 at 8:59 pm
Hi!!!My name is Jaydean.I like the nine tail fox story,its great.What is your favourite
book?
November 14th, 2007 at 9:26 am
My favourite book is Half-Moon Investigations. Whats yours?